- 用过去式：the authors mentioned, stated, introduced…
- 主要修改对比
| 修改前 | 修改后 |
| In this paper, the authors solve the grasp stability detection problem by introducing a method that | In this paper, the authors address the problem of grasp stability detection by introducing a method that... |
| 直接指出问题 | I think this work is quite relevant to this topic, but not included in the reference. | The following reference seems relevant and should be cited: |
| I couldn’t find anywhere in the paper that mentions XXX performs significantly better than XXX. | No place in the paper mentioned that XXX performed significantly better than XXX. |
| Later on, in XXX paragraph X, it is declared that grasp failure is caused by slippage and contact loss. Is that mean slippage and contact loss is the cause of grasp failure? If that is the case, consider mention about the hierarchy rather than listing them parallel. | Later on, in paragraph X of the XXX, it declared that grasp failure was caused by slippage and contact loss. If so, grasp failure should be introduced as the results of 1) and 2) rather than as another source parallel to 1) and 2). |
- 其它细节
- The topic is interesting and using xxx for this task seems new.
- related work单复数？
> How does the related work apply different algorithms to data from different sensors?
- data单复数？